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Chapter 132

"Yang-kun, this is the outline of the novel and some ideas I am preparing, can you help me read it..."

The pretty and fair cheeks of the new name Xiang Baoli were flushed, and she lowered her head slightly, not too embarrassed to look at Xu Yang.

She knew it was the day of the two's date, but she had been a little uncomfortable lately about how to write a manuscript.

Although she is from a literary family, her writing skills and literacy are quite good.

But after all, this is the first time she has written a mystery novel, and she inherits her father's detective left text series...

This made her a little stressed, and she had even been at home for several days.

Originally, she planned to have a good date with Xu Yang today,

But when she thought of Xu Yang's wonderful performance and extraordinary literary skills in front of her father before, she was a little moved.

After a few hesitations, she planned to let Xu Yang help her consult...

Hearing the words of the new name Kahori,

Xu Yang was slightly stunned, then smiled gently, and said politely, "I'm honored to be the first reader of Xiangbaoli..."

Some people may think that it is very bad for a girl to talk about work when she is dating you.

But Xu Yang doesn't think so.

Only if I care about you, will I talk to you about my life situation.

What's more, you can also help her in her career!

Why is it easy for college students who have just come out of the ivory tower to fall in love with their seniors or even bosses in the company?

That's because they have just left school, and they are in a state of confusion about the future, and they are also new to their work.

At this time,

If someone who cares for her and can even help her at work shows up, she will quickly fall...

And Xu Yang chose an enhanced version of this situation!

Because of the successful treatment of Shina Rentaro's relationship, Mrs. Shina has a very good sense of him, not only often saying some good things about him in front of Kaho, but also revealing to him some of her daughter's habits and preferences.

With such a mother-in-law playing assists like crazy, how could he Xu someone fail?

"Hmm..."

Seeing that Xu Yang agreed, the new name Xiang Baoli breathed a sigh of relief in his heart, and handed the small book in his hand to Xu Yang:

"Yangjun, the left text has been published many chapters so far, and the audience has reached the maximum, I really don't know where to optimize..."

Although he is only preparing to inherit his father's pen name, his new name, Kahori, still has some ambitions!

Originally, the new name Rentaro had left her with a wide and flat road.

But she is not willing to be confined to her father's light, and wants to innovate on the detective left text series and write something of her own...

Xu Yang took the small notebook and looked at it, and after being silent for a while, he replied:

"Xiang Baoli, the case is very well conceived, and I feel that the story is very brilliant from some of your settings! Whether it is the foreshadowing arrangement or the emotional transformation, it is very smooth, this is the gentle brushstrokes that belong to your female writer, but..."

Hearing this, the new name Xiang Baoli suddenly took a deep breath and looked at Xu Yang seriously, "Yangjun, just say it!"

"Actually, your current performance has surpassed your father!"

A hint of approval flashed in Xu Yang's eyes, and after seeing that Xiangbao was puzzled, he continued to explain, "But it can only become a novel with good sales, not the Bible of mystery novels..."

"Yangjun, the Bible or something, only "Sherlock Holmes" has such a great name..."

The new name Kahori was stunned for a moment, and quickly shook his head.

"I believe in Kaohori!"

Xu Yang looked at the other party's blue eyes seriously, and said word by word, "I believe you have such potential!" So, I want to ask, what do you think is lacking in "Detective Left Text Series" now?"

Despite his masterful writing skills, Xu Yang did not want his new name, Kaori, to become a replica of him.

What's more, the other party itself has such potential, so Xu Yang turned around in such a big circle to guide.

“......"

His eyes sank slightly, and the new name Kaori fell into thought.

She has also thought about this question many times, but she has never come up with an answer.

But combined with the Sherlock Holmes that Xu Yang just mentioned, she seems to understand something.

"Is it the character-building aspect?"

"That's right!"

Xu Yang nodded in agreement, "Actually, the reason why Sherlock Holmes became a great detective is not because of how smart and intelligent he is!

"I'm sure you've also seen that in the Devil's Heel case, Sherlock Holmes let go of the murderer who killed for revenge, and said that if he encountered that situation, he would also take revenge!"

"From the point of view of the way in which he writes, it makes the story more interesting and the characters richer! There is no doubt that this "uninhibitedness" of Sherlock Holmes was also a factor in his endearing, and as with some other extreme characteristics of him, it made him more like a man of flesh and blood..."

Speaking of which,

Xu Yang paused slightly, leaving the new name Xiang Baoli a short time to think, "In your eyes, as a swordsman and detective, what shines on Zuo Wen?"

"I see!"

Shina Kahori's eyes became brighter and brighter, like a bright light that suddenly bloomed in the lonely and bleak universe, dazzling.

"That's good!"

Xu Yang nodded with satisfaction, and then the corners of his mouth hooked up a wicked smile, "Then the next step is my private goods!"

Then, Xu Yang said, "Obviously, I came first", "For the first time, I had someone I liked, and for the first time, I made a lifelong friend." These two pleasant things are intertwined. And these two joys will bring me a lot of joy. I should have had this dreamlike happy time. However, why did it become the way it is now...", the essence of Hakugaku was passed on to the new name Kahori.

"Yang-kun, isn't this some..."

Shina Kahori was stunned, and a stomach ache appeared on her face.

"Kaohori, dull reasoning has no future!"

Xu Yang replied remarkably, "Think about it, what is the point of working people going home to rest and watching some dull reasoning works!"

"Only when it is mixed with the source of happiness will the spirit be soothed!"

I don't know why,

Looking at Xu Yang's confident smile, the new name Kaori always felt as if the other party was fooling herself...